September - Mic the Microphone and The Living Tombstone

[Zorua]

Music

PMV

I can't remember
What happened in September
When everything is gone
When it's dark and I'm alone

It's been forever
Since I could have remembered
Where the hell is everypony
I just want to know the story
Of what happened right before
I became so alone.

Still can't remember
What happened in September
Back when everypony died
Trails of blood during my stride

I just discovered that
the ponies were defeated
by something really strong
it seemed very weird and wrong
it just doesn't belong
like it came out of this world.

I've regained a small memory
Came to my head just like that suddenly
I think I've gotten a clue
Something tells me this is worse than what I knew.

I just remembered
What happened in September
I'm the one who killed them all
I survived after the fall.

[Moonsparkle]

Is anypony working on this?
I want to make this^^

[Profpatsch]

Noone is working on it as long as it isn't in the WIP forum and someone posted he does it.

[swift]

I noticed no one was working on this so i made it as well as i could (i fail at this stuff though and need someone able to do the pitching and stuff right)

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#TITLE:September
#ARTIST:The Living Tombstone (Feat. Mic, PinkieSkye)
#CREATOR:Swift
#MP3:TombstoneSeptemberToastbeard-Final.mp3
#BPM:212.11
#GAP:20822
: 0 1 0 I
: 4 1 0  can't
: 8 1 0  remember
- 15
: 21 1 0 What
: 26 1 0  happened
: 33 1 0  in
: 37 1 0  September
- 46
: 54 1 0 When
: 58 1 0  everything
: 69 1 0  is
: 74 1 0  gone
- 79
: 83 1 0 When
: 87 1 0  it's
: 91 1 0  dark
: 95 1 0  and
: 100 1 0  I'm
: 104 1 0  alone
- 115
: 126 1 0 It's
: 130 1 0  been
: 134 1 0  forever
- 142
: 149 1 0 Since
: 153 1 0  I
: 158 1 0  could
: 162 1 0  have
: 166 1 0  remembered
- 172
: 177 1 0 Where
: 182 1 0  the
: 186 1 0  hell
: 190 1 0  is
: 194 1 0  everypony
- 202
: 209 1 0 I
: 214 1 0  just
: 218 1 0  want
: 223 1 0  to
: 227 1 0  know
: 231 1 0  the
: 235 1 0  story
- 238
: 241 1 0 Of
: 246 1 0  what
: 250 1 0  happened
: 254 1 0  right
: 261 1 0  before
- 268
: 274 1 0 I
: 281 1 0  became
: 288 1 0  so
: 296 1 0  alone.
- 500
: 703 1 0 Still
: 707 1 0  can't
: 711 1 0  remember
- 719
: 726 1 0 What
: 730 1 0  happened
: 737 1 0  in
: 743 1 0  September
- 748
: 753 1 0 Back
: 758 1 0  when
: 763 1 0  everypony
: 775 1 0  died
- 781
: 787 1 0 Trails
: 791 1 0  of
: 795 1 0  blood
: 799 1 0  during
: 805 1 0  my
: 809 1 0  stride
- 818
: 826 1 0 I
: 831 1 0  just
: 837 1 0  discovered
: 851 1 0  that
- 854
: 857 1 0 The
: 860 1 0  ponies
: 866 1 0  were
: 870 1 0  defeated
- 877
: 884 1 0 By
: 889 1 0  something
: 895 1 0  really
: 903 1 0  strong
- 908
: 913 1 0 It
: 917 1 0  seemed
: 922 1 0  very
: 928 1 0  weird
: 933 1 0  and
: 937 1 0  wrong
- 941
: 945 1 0 It
: 950 1 0  just
: 956 1 0  doesnt
: 968 1 0  belong
- 974
: 980 1 0 Like
: 984 1 0  it
: 988 1 0  came
: 992 1 0  out
: 995 1 0  of
: 999 1 0  this
: 1002 1 0  world.
- 1267
: 1531 1 0 I've
: 1536 1 0  regained
: 1557 1 0  a
: 1561 1 0  small
: 1566 1 0  memory
- 1576
: 1586 1 0 Came
: 1591 1 0  to
: 1595 1 0  my
: 1605 1 0  head
: 1612 1 0  just
: 1617 1 0  like
: 1621 1 0  that
: 1628 1 0  suddenly
- 1656
: 1652 1 0 I
: 1658 1 0  think
: 1671 1 0  I've
: 1691 1 0  gotten
: 1696 1 0  a
: 1701 1 0  clue
- 1707
: 1713 1 0 Something
: 1722 1 0  tells
: 1732 1 0  me
: 1736 1 0  this
: 1741 1 0  is
: 1747 1 0  worse
: 1752 1 0  than
: 1757 1 0  what
: 1762 1 0  I
: 1766 1 0  knew.
- 1956
: 2146 1 0 I
: 2149 1 0  just
: 2155 1 0  remembered
- 2161
: 2167 1 0 What
: 2171 1 0  happened
: 2177 1 0  in
: 2182 1 0  September
- 2188
: 2194 1 0 I'm
: 2198 1 0  the
: 2202 1 0  one
: 2206 1 0  who
: 2210 1 0  killed
: 2214 1 0  them
: 2218 1 0  all
- 2222
: 2226 1 0 I
: 2230 1 0  survived
: 2237 1 0  after
: 2241 1 0  the
: 2250 1 0  fall.
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And planning on trying to make pony swag (even though theres no rap function in ultrastar but im still gonna try it >:D )

EDIT: redoing this because i missed a few words

[Renard]

Thanks!

You can share the song text file using any medium. Since it's just text, you can host it on a server (like you did on GDrive for instance), use Pastebin, or - even easier - just copy/paste it into this forum (in that case, I recommend using [quote] tags).

[Smilley]

Welcome aboard!
If you need tips on how to create texts, just follow the link in my sig.
As for the uploaded files, Google Docs needs every downloader to have permission to the files.
You should try other upload services like Rapidshare, Uploaded.to or Dropbox.

And since you're working on this song,I'll move it to WIP.

[swift]

i've pretty much done all i can because i dont know anything about pitches but im still working on getting the timing and everything right so thanks :)

and i figured out how to put the stuff in the post itself

Edit: just finished redoing the whole timing thing

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#TITLE:September
#ARTIST:The Living Tombstone (Feat. Mic, PinkieSkye)
#CREATOR:Swift
#MP3:TombstoneSeptemberToastbeard-Final.mp3
#BPM:212.11
#GAP:20649
: 0 1 0 I
: 5 1 0  can't
: 9 1 0  remember
- 17
: 25 1 0 What
: 29 1 0  happened
: 36 1 0  in
: 41 1 0  September
- 49
: 57 1 0 When
: 61 1 0  everything
: 73 1 0  is
: 77 1 0  gone
- 82
: 86 1 0 When
: 90 1 0  it's
: 93 1 0  dark
: 97 1 0  and
: 101 1 0  I'm
: 105 1 0  alone
- 117
: 129 1 0 It's
: 133 1 0  been
: 137 1 0  forever
- 145
: 153 1 0 Since
: 157 1 0  I
: 161 1 0  could
: 165 1 0  have
: 169 1 0  remembered
- 175
: 181 1 0 Where
: 185 1 0  the
: 189 1 0  hell
: 193 1 0  is
: 197 1 0  everypony
- 205
: 213 1 0 I
: 217 1 0  just
: 220 1 0  want
: 224 1 0  to
: 228 1 0  know
: 232 1 0  the
: 236 1 0  story
- 241
: 245 1 0 Of
: 249 1 0  what
: 253 1 0  happened
: 259 1 0  right
: 264 1 0  before
- 271
: 278 1 0 I
: 284 1 0  became
: 292 1 0  so
: 298 1 0  alone.
- 502
: 705 1 0 Still
: 709 1 0  can't
: 713 1 0  remember
- 722
: 730 1 0 What
: 734 1 0  happened
: 741 1 0  in
: 748 1 0  September
- 753
: 758 1 0 Back
: 762 1 0  when
: 766 1 0  everypony
: 780 1 0  died
- 785
: 790 1 0 Trails
: 794 1 0  of
: 798 1 0  blood
: 802 1 0  during
: 809 1 0  my
: 812 1 0  stride
- 821
: 829 1 0 I
: 832 1 0  just
: 840 1 0  discovered
: 853 1 0  that
- 857
: 860 1 0 The
: 864 1 0  ponies
: 869 1 0  were
: 874 1 0  defeated
- 880
: 885 1 0 By
: 892 1 0  something
: 900 1 0  really
: 908 1 0  strong
- 913
: 917 1 0 It
: 921 1 0  seemed
: 925 1 0  very
: 932 1 0  weird
: 936 1 0  and
: 940 1 0  wrong
- 944
: 948 1 0 It
: 953 1 0  just
: 957 1 0  doesn't
: 968 1 0  belong
- 974
: 980 1 0 Like
: 985 1 0  it
: 989 1 0  came
: 993 1 0  out
: 996 1 0  of
: 1000 1 0  this
: 1005 1 0  world.
- 1537
: 1531 1 0 I've
: 1534 1 0  regained
: 1561 1 0  a
: 1565 1 0  small
: 1569 1 0  memory
- 1579
: 1588 1 0 Came
: 1592 1 0  to
: 1597 1 0  my
: 1610 1 0  head
: 1617 1 0  just
: 1621 1 0  like
: 1626 1 0  that
: 1632 1 0  suddenly
- 1646
: 1660 1 0 I
: 1663 1 0  think
: 1674 1 0  I've
: 1694 1 0  gotten
: 1702 1 0  a
: 1705 1 0  clue
- 1712
: 1718 1 0 Something
: 1726 1 0  tells
: 1734 1 0  me
: 1739 1 0  this
: 1744 1 0  is
: 1749 1 0  worse
: 1752 1 0  than
: 1760 1 0  what
: 1765 1 0  I
: 1769 1 0  knew.
- 1959
: 2148 1 0 I
: 2151 1 0  just
: 2155 1 0  remembered
- 2162
: 2169 1 0 What
: 2174 1 0  happened
: 2181 1 0  in
: 2186 1 0  September
- 2192
: 2198 1 0 I'm
: 2202 1 0  the
: 2206 1 0  one
: 2210 1 0  who
: 2214 1 0  killed
: 2218 1 0  them
: 2222 1 0  all
- 2226
: 2230 1 0 I
: 2234 1 0  survived
: 2241 1 0  after
: 2245 1 0  the
: 2252 1 0  fall.
E


Would be amazing if someone could do the pitching for me because i suck at that kind of stuff (pretty much suck at music in general but timing the words right isnt hard at all :3 )

[Vengir]

I don't want to discourage you, but it doesn't really work this way. You have to split words into syllabes.

[swift]

i know but i didnt have much time tonight to make it perfect and keep in mind this is my first time trying this + its still W.I.P. 

[Renard]

Hey, that's still a nice start. Timing is mostly okay, so you have starting ticks for each word. ;)

Now, what you'll want to do is split each words into syllables and get the timing for those. Also, you'll have to find out how long each syllable last, before moving on to the pitch. As a tip, I find it easier (less boring) to work phrase by phrase instead of timing the whole song at once. Keep it up!

[swift]

just finished trying to get the syllables right (kind of) now time to head to school :(

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#TITLE:September
#ARTIST:The Living Tombstone (Feat. Mic, PinkieSkye)
#LANGUAGE:English
#GENRE:Pony
#YEAR:2012
#CREATOR:Swift
#MP3:TombstoneSeptemberToastbeard-Final.mp3
#COVER:cover.png
#BACKGROUND:bg.png
#VIDEO:[PMV] September Music Video.mp4
#BPM:212.11
#GAP:20676
: 0 1 0 I
: 4 1 0  can't
: 8 1 0  re
: 12 1 0 mem
: 15 1 0 ber
- 20
: 24 1 0 What
: 28 1 0  hap
: 32 1 0 pened
: 36 1 0  in
: 39 1 0  Sep
: 43 1 0 tem
: 47 1 0 ber
- 52
: 56 1 0 When
: 60 1 0  every
: 67 1 0 thing
: 72 1 0  is
: 75 1 0  gone
- 80
: 84 1 0 When
: 88 1 0  it's
: 91 1 0  dark
: 95 1 0  and
: 99 1 0  I'm
: 104 1 0  alone
- 116
: 128 1 0 It's
: 132 1 0  been
: 135 1 0  for
: 139 1 0 ever
- 145
: 151 1 0 Since
: 156 1 0  I
: 159 1 0  could
: 163 1 0  have
: 167 1 0  re
: 171 1 0 mem
: 175 1 0 bered
- 177
: 179 1 0 Where
: 184 1 0  the
: 187 1 0  hell
: 192 1 0  is
: 196 1 0  every
: 203 1 0 pony
- 208
: 212 1 0 I
: 216 1 0  just
: 220 1 0  want
: 224 1 0  to
: 229 1 0  know
: 233 1 0  the
: 236 1 0  sto
: 239 1 0 ry
- 242
: 244 1 0 Of
: 248 1 0  what
: 251 1 0  hap
: 255 1 0 pened
: 259 1 0  right
: 263 1 0  before
- 272
: 280 1 0 I
: 284 1 0  be
: 287 1 0 came
: 291 1 0  so
: 294 1 0  alone.
- 499
: 704 1 0 Still
: 708 1 0  can't
: 712 1 0  re
: 716 1 0 mem
: 720 1 0 ber
- 724
: 728 1 0 What
: 732 1 0  hap
: 736 1 0 pened
: 740 1 0  in
: 744 1 0  Sep
: 748 1 0 tem
: 752 1 0 ber
- 755
: 758 1 0 Back
: 761 1 0  when
: 765 1 0  every
: 771 1 0 pony
: 780 1 0  died
- 784
: 788 1 0 Trails
: 792 1 0  of
: 796 1 0  blood
: 800 1 0  during
: 807 1 0  my
: 812 1 0  stride
- 819
: 826 1 0 I
: 832 1 0  just
: 840 1 0  dis
: 844 1 0 cov
: 847 1 0 ered
: 853 1 0  that
- 855
: 857 1 0 The
: 861 1 0  ponies
: 865 1 0  were
: 869 1 0  de
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- 880
: 883 1 0 By
: 891 1 0  something
: 899 1 0  really
: 908 1 0  strong
- 912
: 916 1 0 It
: 920 1 0  seemed
: 924 1 0  very
: 931 1 0  weird
: 937 1 0  and
: 940 1 0  wrong
- 944
: 948 1 0 It
: 952 1 0  just
: 955 1 0  doesn't
: 966 1 0  be
: 971 1 0 long
- 975
: 979 1 0 Like
: 984 1 0  it
: 988 1 0  came
: 991 1 0  out
: 996 1 0  of
: 1000 1 0  this
: 1004 1 0  world.
- 1267
: 1530 1 0 I've
: 1533 1 0  re
: 1542 1 0 gained
: 1558 1 0  a
: 1563 1 0  small
: 1568 1 0  memory
- 1579
: 1589 1 0 Came
: 1593 1 0  to
: 1596 1 0  my
: 1608 1 0  head
: 1615 1 0  just
: 1619 1 0  like
: 1624 1 0  that
: 1631 1 0  sud
: 1635 1 0 den
: 1639 1 0 ly
- 1648
: 1657 1 0 I
: 1660 1 0  think
: 1672 1 0  I've
: 1692 1 0  gotten
: 1697 1 0  a
: 1702 1 0  clue
- 1710
: 1717 1 0 Some
: 1720 1 0 thing
: 1725 1 0  tells
: 1731 1 0  me
: 1735 1 0  this
: 1742 1 0  is
: 1747 1 0  worse
: 1751 1 0  than
: 1758 1 0  what
: 1763 1 0  I
: 1767 1 0  knew.
- 2147
: 2144 1 0 I
: 2148 1 0  just
: 2153 1 0  re
: 2157 1 0 mem
: 2161 1 0 bered
- 2165
: 2168 1 0 What
: 2172 1 0  hap
: 2176 1 0 pened
: 2180 1 0  in
: 2184 1 0  Sep
: 2188 1 0 tem
: 2192 1 0 ber
- 2195
: 2197 1 0 I'm
: 2200 1 0  the
: 2204 1 0  one
: 2208 1 0  who
: 2212 1 0  killed
: 2216 1 0  them
: 2220 1 0  all
- 2224
: 2228 1 0 I
: 2232 1 0  sur
: 2236 1 0 vived
: 2240 1 0  after
: 2247 1 0  the
: 2252 1 0  fall.
E


THIS ISNT DONE YET!
gonna have to redo it when i get the pmv, cover and background for it and get everything i missed in this one.

EDIT: The version with the pmv bg and cover is done! i removed the last version in this post and changed it to the new one! the pmv, bg and cover will be uploaded with the notes and song itself when im finished with the whole thing!

[swift]

It would be amazing if someone could take some spare time and do the pitching and note lenghts for me because i have no idea what im doing :(

[Renard]

Me neither!


Thanks or the update, added it to the repository. :D

[swift]

np ill try it later sometime when i have more time got a crap ton of bookreports to make atm :S

[swift]

Decided to try out the pitching and stuff like that but its just too frustrating for me :S sorry everyone! maybe someone else can try it for me because i just get mad at it.

[Renard]

That's fine - no pressure :)
Thanks for trying. I'm keeping the file you submitted in its current state in the repository, so that anyone can edit it at will.

[swift]

seems fine to me also if anyone is looking for a desktop of one of the mane 6 check my deviant art its in my autograph thing.

[Moonsparkle]

Done
http://brony.at/TLTftMTM-S
An unbelievable long link :D

[Smilley]

Good work. Only one minor thing: you should give the instrumental version a different title, else there's no way to tell the two versions apart at one quick glance. It doesn't help that the preview starts during an interlude, either.

EDIT: Also, the score on the Golden Notes is at about 3000. You might want to reduce that to 1000-1500.

[Moonsparkle]

Oh,
I've forgotten this^^