Generosity - AcoustiMandoBrony [Ft. EileMonty]

Started by Meltian, August 20, 2013, 09:09:45 PM

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Meltian



Artwork by MandoPony: http://mandopony.deviantart.com/art/Generosity-392996825
MP3: (Provided in in the video)

The day begins,
She makes herself look pure,
I know she'll turn some heads,
Of that I'm sure,
Now you know she's looking fine,
All so divine all so sublime,
She gets to work.
Don't you know a stitch in time saves nine.

When they all see her come around,
You know there's something here to be found,
A lush beauty,
Like a diamond ring,
Of the highest Rarity,
And even more beautiful inside,
Reach way down deep and I'm sure you'll find,
That she can bring,
That little something,
Called Generosity.

So elegant, as she
Waltzes across the room,
Watch her shine now,
Her time it will come soon,
Now let's use just what we know,
C'mon now let's go, go, go,
And dance the night away,
Until we all have to go home.

When they all see her come around,
You know there's something here to be found,
A lush beauty,
Like a diamond ring,
Of the highest Rarity,
And even more beautiful inside,
Reach way down deep and I'm sure you'll find,
That she can bring,
That little something,
Called Generosity.

Now come watch the moonlight reflect off her sapphire eyes,
I'll stick by you forever and every single day to forge and reinforce the bonds that tie us,
Now come and join me in harmony,
This is the best possible thing,
She'll be here waiting,
For you to all break out and sing.


And late at night I wonder.
As I lay my head down to slumber,
I weave through time,
(She weaves through time,)
Like a dress on design it's true,
Just know I could be generous to you.
(I wish I could be generous to you)

When I see her come around,
(When you see me come around,)
I know there's something there to be found,
A lush beauty,
Like a diamond ring,
Of the highest Rarity,
And even more beautiful inside,
Reach way down deep and help me find,
I can bring,
That little something,
Called Generosity.

Marioland1

It looks like a fine suggestion.  You might want to try using a code block for the lyrics instead of a quote though, as it makes it easier to scroll past and won't take up so much room.

Meltian

Ah. Thanks for the suggestion. Looks much better now.

Renard


Renard

Near-final draft available in QA. No golden notes right now. Pretty sure some pitches are off.