This song is already released (thanks Renard!), but I had a suggestion. The "Love You" section has 64 "love you"s in a row, and they are all on their own lines. This makes the notes scroll by very quickly. There's also no visual cue for the pitches, as each line is centered in roughly the same position on the screen. Maybe it would be better to group the "love you"s by fours (or even eights)? I think it would make the section easier to sing. For reference, the section is at 2:01: