Do You Want To See The Moon Rise?

Started by Lichtschatten, April 06, 2016, 12:01:55 PM

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Lichtschatten

I got a smal local Team, creating Karaoke Songs. As far as these match here, we'd love to share them on MLK

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Lichtschatten

I'm proud to present this beta-version of the song:
As soon as anypony will take a look over the notes, i'll do the duet version

https://maschinencloud.derpy.ws/index.php/s/CFZDNnhd8LrON1N


Greetings Lichtschatten
I got a smal local Team, creating Karaoke Songs. As far as these match here, we'd love to share them on MLK

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Smilley

I took a gander. It's not bad for a first try - and not a bad song to practice on, as it's relatively short -, but it shows a bit that you're not a native speaker. Also, it looks a bit better if you put every word in a seperate note, even on faded-out parts. I've also amended some of the trickier progressions. Have a look for yourself:

#TITLE:Do You Wanna See the Moon Rise
#ARTIST:EileMonty & MEMJ0123
#CREATOR:Lichtschatten
#LANGUAGE:English
#MP3:song.mp3
#COVER:cover.png
#BACKGROUND:background.png
#VIDEO:video.mp4
#VIDEOGAP:0.43
#BPM:400
#GAP:1300
F 33 16 1 Tia?
- 60
F 69 23 1 TIAAAA!
- 120
F 127 11 1 Tia?
- 170
: 190 4 3 Does
: 196 6 3  thou
: 203 3 3  wan
: 207 2 3 na
: 212 4 3  see
: 218 2 7  the
: 221 11 5  moon
: 233 4 5 rise
: 238 25 7 ~?
- 270
: 278 6 3 Watch
: 287 2 3  the
: 290 4 3  end
: 295 3 2 ing
: 300 3 3  of
: 304 4 7  the
: 309 30 5  day
- 348
: 358 3 3 I
: 362 5 3  have
: 368 4 3  been
: 373 4 3  work
: 378 6 -2 ing,
: 385 3 3  oh,
: 389 4 7  so
: 394 5 8  ver
: 400 3 7 y
: 407 9 3  hard
- 420
: 422 3 -2 To
: 426 5 8  move
: 432 2 7  the
: 437 7 3  stars,
- 447
: 447 2 3 In
: 450 4 3 to
: 456 3 3  a
: 461 4 5  beau
: 466 4 5 ti
: 471 7 3 ful
: 483 42 10  'ray!
- 535
: 542 6 8 It's
: 549 5 10  just
: 555 3 8  been
: 561 4 7  kind
: 566 2 8  of
: 572 6 10  lone
: 583 9 3 ly,
- 598
: 602 4 -2 All
: 607 4 3  these
: 612 9 5  things
: 622 5 7  I
: 628 11 3  do
- 645
: 649 4 3 And
: 655 9 7  no
: 665 5 5 po
: 671 4 3 ny
: 677 9 5  seems
: 688 9 7  to
: 698 41 12  care!
- 747
: 752 5 3 Does
: 758 4 3  thou
: 763 5 3  wan
: 770 3 3 na
: 775 4 3  see
: 780 3 7  the
: 785 9 5  moon
: 795 3 5 rise
: 799 27 7 ~?
- 831
: 833 5 3 Oh,
: 839 4 3  we
: 844 3 3  can
: 849 5 3  hang
: 855 4 -2  out
: 860 4 3  'till
: 865 3 7  the
: 870 10 5  sun
: 882 30 3 rise!
- 924
F 924 5 1 Not
F 930 2 1  to
F 933 5 1 night,
F 939 7 1  Luna
- 946
: 950 10 3 O
: 963 12 2 kay,
: 979 76 3  fine...
- 1128
F 1148 47 1 *Sob*
- 1194
F 1211 7 1 Why
F 1219 5 1  does
F 1225 9 1  every
F 1235 8 1 one
F 1246 10 1  sleep
F 1259 4 1  through
F 1264 4 1  my
F 1271 7 1  gor
F 1278 9 1 geous
F 1289 11 1  night?
- 1320
F 1344 12 1 *sob*
- 1387
F 1407 22 1  Celestia?
- 1443
: 1464 4 3 Does
: 1469 5 3  thou
: 1475 4 3  wan
: 1481 2 3 na
: 1485 3 3  see
: 1490 3 7  the
: 1494 12 5  moon
: 1507 4 5 rise
: 1512 23 7 ~?
- 1540
: 1542 2 3 I
: 1546 5 3  wan
: 1552 2 3 na
: 1555 5 3  show
: 1561 3 -2  you,
: 1566 5 3  come
: 1572 4 7  with
: 1578 35 5  me!
- 1618
: 1623 3 3 O
: 1627 4 3 ri
: 1632 3 3 on's
: 1637 5 3  stars
: 1644 3 -2  are
: 1648 3 3  out
: 1652 3 7  and
: 1656 7 8  shi
: 1664 5 7 ning
: 1670 8 3  bright
- 1681
: 1683 3 3 It's
: 1688 5 3  such
: 1694 2 7  a
: 1698 8 8  gor
: 1707 5 7 geous
: 1713 4 3  night,
: 1718 3 3  oh
: 1722 3 3  won't
: 1726 3 -2  you
: 1730 5 3  come
: 1737 3 7  and
* 1741 22 10  see?
- 1778
: 1794 3 10 It's
: 1798 2 10  just
: 1801 3 10  that
: 1805 4 10  no
: 1810 2 8  one
: 1814 4 7  seems
: 1819 3 8  to
: 1823 6 10  no
: 1830 6 3 tice
- 1848
: 1853 3 -2 All
: 1857 2 3  the
: 1863 9 5  things
: 1873 5 7  I
: 1880 10 3  do   
- 1895
: 1898 5 3 I
: 1904 8 7  feel
: 1913 5 5  like
: 1919 5 3  I'm
* 1926 8 5  go
* 1935 9 7 ing
: 1945 39 12  mad!
- 2058
F 2078 6 1 Don't
F 2086 5 1  feel
F 2093 9 1  it,
F 2122 8 1  don't
F 2133 7 1  fight
F 2142 2 1  it
F 2145 21 1  anymore
- 2171
F 2191 5 1 There
F 2197 3 1 can
F 2201 5 1  only
F 2208 5 1  be
F 2215 7 1  one
F 2225 12 1  princess
F 2238 2 1  in
F 2241 24 1  Equestria
- 2286
F 2296 20 1 MUAHAHA
- 2320
F 2322 5 1 And
F 2329 6 1  that
F 2337 27 1  princess
F 2370 15 1  shall
F 2387 9 1  be
F 2398 32 1  me!
- 2440
F 2460 4 1 I'm
F 2465 9 1  sorry,
F 2475 18 1  sister
- 2535
F 2555 4 1 I
F 2560 5 1  must
F 2568 5 1  do
F 2574 9 1  this
- 2608
F 2628 4 1 You
F 2633 4 1  must
F 2641 2 1  be
F 2644 19 1  stopped!
- 2687
F 2697 57 1 Nooooooooooo~
- 2808
F 2828 9 1 Oh,
F 2838 20 1  Luna...
- 2875
: 2892 7 3 Sis
: 2903 6 -2 ter,
: 2910 13 3  please
: 2924 5 7  for
: 2930 10 5 give
: 2942 34 7  me
- 2990
: 2999 7 3 Why
: 3009 2 3  did
: 3013 2 3  it
: 3016 4 3  have
: 3022 5 -2  to
: 3029 4 3  end
: 3035 12 7  like
: 3048 19 5  this?
- 3081
: 3101 5 3 If
: 3108 5 3  on
: 3114 5 -2 ly
: 3121 5 3  I
: 3127 4 -2  had
: 3132 9 3  just
: 3142 5 7  been
: 3148 14 8  there
: 3163 6 7  for
: 3170 13 3  you
- 3188
: 3192 5 3 Just
: 3199 7 3  like
: 3207 6 7  I
: 3214 10 8  'ought
: 3225 5 7  have
: 3231 8 3  to...
- 3242
: 3245 9 3 I
: 3255 8 7  was
: 3264 5 3  re
: 3271 47 10 miss
- 3323
: 3326 5 10 So
: 3332 6 10  dis
: 3339 5 10 tract
: 3346 4 8 ed
: 3352 5 7  by
: 3358 5 8  my
: 3364 6 10  du
: 3371 12 3 ties
- 3397
: 3407 5 3 Now
: 3414 13 5  I'm
: 3429 5 7  al
: 3435 14 3 one
- 3455
: 3458 5 3 I
: 3464 14 7  just
: 3479 4 5  don't
: 3484 6 3  know
: 3491 9 5  what
: 3501 9 7  to
* 3511 71 12  do?
- 3637
: 3676 9 5 D'you
: 3687 5 3  wan
: 3694 3 2 na
: 3699 9 3  see
: 3709 4 7  the
* 3715 14 5  moon
* 3730 9 5 rise?
* 3740 23 7 ~
- 4160
F 4190 32 1 Luna....
- 4261
F 4281 9 1 I'm
F 4291 29 1  sorry
- 4432
F 4452 37 1 LUNAAAAAAA!
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Lichtschatten

Cool, thanks, for fixing and supervision. I includet your changes to my zip
I'll try/check it as soon, as i got some spare minutes.

yes i'm just an poorly english speaking german, but I try my best  ;D
I got a smal local Team, creating Karaoke Songs. As far as these match here, we'd love to share them on MLK

[url="https://maschinencloud.derpy.ws/index.php/s/Grm4EgpYbh1LVfa"]https://maschinencloud.derpy.ws/index.php/s/Grm4EgpYbh1LVfa[/url]